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Granted, but by writing anything you have ergo wished. I wish I could find the track I'm looking for.

You don't want to know, truly.

Wow, Dan. These are all so beautiful. I wouldn't even be able to pick a favorite. No criticism - merely praise. Gorgeous, all. ^_^

Beautiful, cadmium, simply beautiful. The last stanza is the best. In fact, the only spot(s) I would recomend some editing is in the first stanza, the description. She, round edges ...

*books a flight to Wellington* Muahahaha. ^_^ I'm ahead of ya.

*goes to pack* ;)

Oy, Alanna, if you intend to post serious pieces and get serious feedback, at least do your readers the common courtesy of proofreading your work before you post it, yeah? ...

Oh? Sounds good to me. ^_~ I'll meet you in... oh, say New Zealand in two weeks? For bungee jumping? I'll meet you at the airport. XD ;)

Congrats, Fand, you definitely deserved it. ^_^ And congrats to the top 5! ;)

Granted, but then - naturally - the rate of inflation gets completely out of contol and your money is, in the end, worthless. I wish I picked up on french ...

Heh, I'm still looking. Though I got more Mozart and Chopin sheet music for Christmas, so I'm thinking that's going to keep me entirely too busy as it is. ^_^ ...

Beautiful, Yoha. The kind of story that my dad would cry through. ^_~ As you say, you haven't done too much editing, but the only thing I can really point ...

10/10 Simple and yet striking. ^_^